Breeana exhaled, her breath clouded the glass. She wrote Mel in the small patch of moisture and encased his name inside a heart. He would be awake by now. Probably getting ready to go hunting.
Her stomach clenched as if a giant fist had closed around it, squeezing.
She sniffed, catching her faint reflection in the glass. When she saw the sparkle of tears and the dead look in her eyes, her hands curled into tight fists as anger blazed through her.
“I hope you're as miserable as me you rotten son-of-a-bitch! I hope you feel as dead inside—as destroyed—as I do.”
Her face crumpled and she hugged her middle, trying to hold herself together, but it didn't work. Great wracking sobs tore from her throat.
Rage edged around the pain. Abruptly, her sobs turned to screams. She pounded her fists against the glass, then furiously smeared his name. “You bastard! How could you do this to me? How could you—”
17 comments:
I'm there with Breeana. I can see her steaming the glass and writing Mel's name. The way you've shown her has me agonizing along with her.
Spectacular writing.
Great snippet--and great book!
Thanks, Sherri.
Yeah, I have been there before in my real life. The only difference was I bruised my hand, lol.
Aw, thank you, Lisa. And thanks for coming by.
Very emotional scene. Loved it!
Thank you, Sharon. And thank you for coming by.
Great scene!
Thank you, Maggie.
Oh, what fantastic emotion...Great scene, Brenda...
Thank you, Sara! And I really appreciate you coming by!
daymn girl! love it!
DUCKIE!!! LOL, where the heck have you been?
I'm so happy you stopped by!
lol...the moon apparently..lol...
Well stop going to the moon. Stay here with the rest of us, lol.
i'll hang up the space suit...for now...lol
What the heck did he do? I can guess, but I'm afraid to. Such an emotionally charged scene. Can't wait to read this. :)
Wow! What an emotional scene. I'm afraid to ask what the heck did he do to her?
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